--- a/farol/templates/about.j2	Fri Oct 17 16:09:09 2014 +0200
+++ b/farol/templates/about.j2	Thu Oct 23 16:18:30 2014 +0200
@@ -30,14 +30,12 @@
 
 {% block content %}
 <div class="page-header">
-<h1>Farol <small>A Security Advisory Management (Web) Platform</small></h1>
+<h1>Farol <small>The Security Advisory Management Platform</small></h1>
 </div>
 
 <div>
-  <p>Security Advisories have existed for ever. Whenever someone discovered a danger, a vulnerability, he immediately started spreading the words about it.</p>
-  <p>In the IT World, each Party involved with security vulnerabilities have its own way of dealing with the matter, and although standards exist they aren't used much to their full extend.<p>
-  <p>This Platform is an attempt at bringing all those worlds together.<p>
-  <p>In the current version, Advisories not currently saved are kept in memory of the running process. If the process terminates, and they are not saved, documents are lost.</p>
+  <p>This web platform offers to review, create, edit and transform security advisories supporting various input and output formats.</p>
+  <p>During your session the advisory is stored in a cache from which you should save your changes to your local file system.</p>
   {% if config.DEBUG and not config.DEBUG_SURE %}
     <hr>
     <h3 id="debug">Debug Mode</h3>